Birthday By: Brandie
One day it was a little girl's birthday. Her name was Lisa. She thought everyone forgot her birthday. It was today. But no one forgot. Her friend and parent threw a party for her at church. So she opened the door turned on the lights...and everyone jumped out of there hiding spots and yelled SURPRISE, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! She felt so special that day when she opened her gifts and everyone sang Happy Birthday to her. Her favorite gift was a new doll house.
posted by Everett Eagles @ 7:36 AM
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3 Comments:
Brandie,
I really liked your story. Sometimes surprises are nice, but Lisa was sad before she found out about her party. I'm glad that she really had a surprise and that her mom and her friends didn't forget about her birthday!
Thanks for sharing your story, Brandie!
Mrs. Fuller
What a nice story. I love surprise birthday parties! Have you ever had someone surprise you on your birthday?
I love your illustration too!
Keep on writing!!!
Mrs. Zetterman
Brandie,
What a fun story. I can tell you worked hard on your picture too. When is your birthday?
Mrs. Peterson
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